When you're
writing stories where people are speaking, do you often find yourself
using the word 'said' all the time?
"Are you going home?"
said John.
"Yes" said Sarah.
"I'll see you later then" said John.
"OK" said Sarah.
See what I mean? It can get
a bit boring, and doesn't really describe how people actually say things.
When we speak, we ask questions, tell people what to do, shout, whisper
and many more things. When you are writing stories with speech, you should
try to replace the word 'said' with words that describe how the speech
is said.
For example, if a character
asks a question try:
"How?" asked
John.
If a character is angry try:
"Just shut up!" screamed
Sarah.
You can make your writing even
better by adding words that describe speech even more accurately.
For example, if John was really
interested to know the answer to a question, you could write:
"How?" John asked
curiously.
"Just shut up!" Sarah
screamed desperately.
It's easy - all you need to
do is remember some alternative words to 'said' and use your imagination!
Here are some ideas to get
you started. Simply click the 'STOP' button to see a suggestion, and 'GO'
to restart. The machine works randomly, so some of the suggestions will
be useful while others will just be funny. We hope you enjoy them!
If you don't understand some
of the words, or want to find extra words to use, try using the GridClub
Dictionary and Thesaurus in the Look It Up section.