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When you're writing stories where people are speaking, do you often find yourself using the word 'said' all the time?

"Are you going home?" said John.
"Yes" said Sarah.
"I'll see you later then" said John.
"OK" said Sarah.

See what I mean? It can get a bit boring, and doesn't really describe how people actually say things. When we speak, we ask questions, tell people what to do, shout, whisper and many more things. When you are writing stories with speech, you should try to replace the word 'said' with words that describe how the speech is said.

For example, if a character asks a question try:

"How?" asked John.

If a character is angry try:

"Just shut up!" screamed Sarah.

You can make your writing even better by adding words that describe speech even more accurately.

For example, if John was really interested to know the answer to a question, you could write:

"How?" John asked curiously.

"Just shut up!" Sarah screamed desperately.

It's easy - all you need to do is remember some alternative words to 'said' and use your imagination!

Here are some ideas to get you started. Simply click the 'STOP' button to see a suggestion, and 'GO' to restart. The machine works randomly, so some of the suggestions will be useful while others will just be funny. We hope you enjoy them!

If you don't understand some of the words, or want to find extra words to use, try using the GridClub Dictionary and Thesaurus in the Look It Up section.

Words to use instead of 'Said'.

added
admitted
answered
argued
asked
assented
babbled
bantered
bawled
berated
bet
blurted
bragged
broached
bugged
called
cautioned
challenged
chatted
cheered
chuckled
cited
claimed
coaxed
conceded
confessed
corrected
cried
croaked
crowed
dared
decided
declared
demanded
denied
drawled
droned
ended
estimated
exclaimed
explained
fretted
gasped
greeted
hinted
indicated
informed
insisted
jeered
lamented
laughed
leered
lied
mocked
murmured
muttered
named
nodded
nudged
offered
ordered
outlined
panted
pleaded
praised
prayed
presented
promised
questioned
quibbled
quipped
quizzed
quoted
ranted
rejoiced
reminded
replied
requested
retorted
revealed
roared
scowled
signed
simpered
smiled
smirked
snickered
spluttered
stammered
stated
stormed
stuttered
suggested
tempted
volunteered
wailed
wept
whispered
wondered
yelled

Adverbs to use after 'Said'.

angrily
anxiously
briskly
cautiously
crudely
desperately
groggily
haltingly
happily
hesitantly
joyfully
longingly
miserably
rapidly
respectfully
rudely
sadly
shyly
sleepily
suspiciously
triumphantly
truthfully

 

 

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